Youtube Link ------> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5yvYyqnioCo&feature=youtu.be
The feedback I received was very helpful. What surprised me the most was that I did not make enough eye contact with the camera last time so I made sure to try and fix that, along with more facial expressions in this video.
Based on the feedback, I Made more eye contact and I cut down my pitch a lot, down from 90 to 60 seconds.
I love your pitch. It definitely looks like you have become more confident and are able to stick to the matter. I feel like you had enough eye contact to keep the conversation engaging and to make the listener feel like they are not being ignored. I can see that you are more comfortable with your topic and that the pitch looks more natural.
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome way to improve your body language when it comes to promote your business idea. This aspect is so important because we have to master it in order to network with other potential business partners. I have definitely gotten better at this thanks to this type of exercises. As I have said before, your business idea is very good. Of course, the financial and distribution aspects of it are going to be the most difficult ones to attain in this service.
ReplyDeleteMatt, I congratulate you on your third pitch. I think you did better…On that note, I think you are still struggling a little with the eye contact issue. I think you kept looking to your left. I think that you keep checking either the clock or the camera. This could tend to be a little distracting. I also think you are trying to fit a little too much information into your pitch. Maybe take some of the less important facts out. I do commend you on memorizing so many talking points. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteI think that mentioning this company and product's use for college kids in particular was a great way for you to bring in more sales from parents. I do agree that the eye contact can get a bit distracting if you aren't looking directly at the camera. Overall, I thought this pitch was really great and I love your product idea.
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