The feedback I received was all supportive but there were a few changes I made to my pitch in order to make it more concise and closer to the 90 second time limit given. I cut out some of the unnecessary details that made the pitch longer and I also tried to make more eye contact.
In my last video I spoke in a more monotone voice than I intended to so I also tried to add more enthusiasm and facial expressions in this video than in my last.
